Saturday, May 8, 2010

Consumed..














When did this begin .. ?
When will this be over .. ?
just so magical .. almost dreamy ..
its those moments that keep me alive in you ..
why the distance .. why the pain ?
Although the pain is a constant reminder ..
that u live in me too ..

8 comments:

Anonymity said...

Rather selfish, don't you think?

Juhi said...

Maybe it is .. but i didnt mean it in a selfish way .. i meant that even though u know i with u .. i too share the same feeling .. so its not a one way street

*I appreciate your comments a lot ..although may i know who this is ? just for curiosity sakes ?*

i would like to know what you think abt this though ..

Anonymity said...

"I appreciate your comments a lot ..although may i know who this is ? just for curiosity sakes ?"

Well here's the thing: I'm pretty certain before OverLord Google led me to your blog, I was unaware of your (and this blog's existence). My name is Vishal Bhatia, and I'm a copywriter, and also an academic editor. I read the diaper shirt post, and had an Epic LOL moment. This got me interested in your blog, which, upon reading, I found rather fun. Miss Khanna, I hope that suffices your curiosity.


"Maybe it is .. but i didnt mean it in a selfish way .. i meant that even though u know i with u .. i too share the same feeling .. so its not a one way street

i would like to know what you think abt this though .."

I'll tell you why I said what I said. What really got me were the last four lines:
'just so magical .. almost dreamy ..
its those moments that keep me alive in you ..
why the distance .. why the pain ?
Although the pain is a constant reminder ..
that u live in me too ..'
Here, from what I understood, I get that while 'he' associates 'you' with moments that are dreamy and magical, 'you' associate 'him' with moments that are painful. My first thought was, why so? But, from what you have said now, I feel that 'distance' here implies spatial separation, and not mental. Am I right?


PS: Sorry for the delayed (and long) reply. Also, I hope I haven't intruded your space.

Juhi said...

wow !! im overwhelmed with this reply !

So hello Vishal :) welcome to my blog
I am really happy that u find my blog fun n interesting ! *i don't hear that often*

and i didn't think so deep about my words that u associated them to be ! but to be clear .. yes u got the meaning right now .. that the distance isn't mental .. rather spatial ..

Anonymity said...

In response to the above:

Miss Khanna, well you see, we writers have a tendency of deriving rather astounding derivations from a few words.

Also, pardon my curiosity... but was the poem pertaining to a long-distance relationship? Really sorry if this is inapt.

Juhi said...

i choose to not reply to this comment .. its too early to tell anything about it ..

Anonymity said...

Roger... sorry about that.

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